Thursday, March 19, 2009

tHE Untold Story - Part IV

Hey guys and gals,
On request of my friends and bloggers, I am posting the part four of Untold series.I am not quite sure, how long these is going to be continued. So for time being, here is the fourth part.Those who haven't read, here is the first, second and third part.

tHE Untold Story - Part IV

Sneha greeted me when I came home. She seemed to have gained lot of weight and looked even more cuter. I never thought she would speak to me. But here she was, joking on my weight and color. I was quite happy.

Gradually we spoke a lot but this time not on phone; it was face to face, as I had always dreamed of. Sometimes she used to speak non-stop and I use to be lost in seeing her cute face. My days began with her and ended with her.

I asked her out, she readily agreed. Some times for lunch, sometimes for movie, shopping or would just end up in beach. She complained non-stop about her complexion becoming dark in the beach. It was heartwarming to see her beside me. I was content with my life. I couldn’t ask god for more. I loved her more than ever.

Eventually it turned out, that she loved me too but she had some problem in accepting me. She mentioned the reason. I understood her problem but who will make my heart understand?? It’s difficult to let it go but she begged me to understand, so I tried to let it go. The pain was inexpressible. Initially I couldn’t control my feelings and I would end up messaging her or calling her. But this time, she replied harshly.

I was numb by what she said, initially it hurt but I understood her reasons. I don't hate her; I don't think I can ever hate her. She is special for me. I love her and for her sake, I had to let her go.

She says that it’s the best for both of us. I could never deny her anything. I am left with memories, so I will cherish the moments which I have shared with her. I am back to my work place.I can only pray that she comes back to me.

I miss her.

Love
Naveen

P/S : Last part would be from Sneha.

17 comments:

Charmed One! said...

Awwww its a sad ending... hope it had turned out better for both of them :( .....

mayz said...

there is a 5th part wid a happy endin rite???

hitch writer said...

hey the endings must be happy....

come on....

moi said...

@charmedone : life doesnt come with happy endings always :(

@mayz: fifth part is from sneha, so the story remains the same.

@hitchwriter : i would reply same as I have replied for charmedone

Onthewingsofadream said...

I know life doesnt have happy endings ..thats why most of us cry at dragic love stories ..they touch a cord ...

very well written ....and yes , no explaination is enough for a heart in love ..

Suresh Kumar said...

You have really very well captured the situation. I guess I can understand the situation pretty much.

The girls have to be tough on this matter even if it means hurting the ones you love.

NE~ISM said...

MY GOSH!! Why can't they just be together???? It breaks my heart to see him going through this!

He loves her and she loves him..Why is everything so complicated..

Okay I have to snap out of this! lol

Cannot wait until the next part!
SNEHA better get herself straight! lol

Ne

Lancelot said...

@ Tu

so you got the email i send u with this 4th part and the final part by Sneha...good... and yeah everybody - not all stories end with a happy note... sniff sniff - can u lend me your tissue sniff sniff....

moi said...

@onthewingsofadream : Yeah such stories, we hope its a fiction but they do happen in real life!!

moi said...

@suresh : yeah gals need to be strong but that doesn't mean she doesn't love him

moi said...

@nehya : hmmm they cant be together cos of a reason which sneha would tell out hopefully!!

moi said...

@lancelot : after seeing you with hankies, even I feel like crying :(

Lancelot said...

I am not with hankies i m with tissues...boooooooohooooooooooohoooooooooooo

moi said...

@lancelot : wat booohooo?? At least your using tissues na, so that means you cried na!! it doesn't matter if it was hanky or tissue after all

Lancelot said...

boohoo is crying out loud,...don;t disturb a crying kid - instead buy me chocolate or ice cream to make me calm...i am so sad boooooooooohoooooooooohoooooooo

ApocalypsE said...

not fair... poor naveen...wat was the prob?

aZoed said...

wish Naveen had been a bit less emotional... but can't really help it.. and yes, we must accept the fact that happy endings are never a part of the harsh reality...