Monday, March 2, 2009

tHE Untold story - part I

She had moved newly into this town and used to visit my house once in a month. She came from hostel every Saturday evening and went back by Monday morning. I always wanted to talk to her, but I was too shy to approach her. She always spoke with my parents and my sister. Whenever we came face to face, she just smiled and said an informal Hi. She got a new cell and we exchanged numbers, and that's how we started chatting. And we became friends. Not very close friends but something better than nothing I would say.She was very humble and down to earth even though she was not from here, she seemed to have got adjusted. On some Mondays, she requested me to drop her to college.I was more than enthusiastic to drop her but pretended as though it was cumbersome task.Some Friday evenings, she used to asked me to pick her from college. Due to my eagerness, I used to reach even before time .I don't know when I must have started falling in love with her. But I never found the courage to tell her, and months flew by.

Love
Naveen

13 comments:

americanising desi said...

ooooooooohhhh is there something yummy cookin in that pot?

Prakhar said...

eagerly awaiting the next part!

Charmed One! said...

Hmmm am eager to read the next part gal :D ...

You have awarded for your blog gal.. do pick it up :) ..

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

that is a good start :-)
What happened next?

Lancelot said...

i know this story :P

moi said...

@americanising desi : yeah you have to wait for two more days. :)

@prakhar : yeah will post it today itself :)

@charmed one : thank you so much dear :)

@raaji : yeah its in 3 parts, lets see :)

@lancelot : please tell me the story now itself

Lancelot said...

cannot you have wait till you post the second part :P

moi said...

@lancelot : very smart :)

Lancelot said...

thank u thank u thank u...please spread my popularity :P

mayz said...

ahhhh sounds interestin...waitin...

Suresh Kumar said...

I know What I have to do to comment. Wait for the remaining parts. :)

NE~ISM said...

I had to come and read this one before part 2 and I am on to part 2 right now... you got me all excited to read it! lol Great post!

Ne.

aZoed said...

I have seen something like this... though I'll really love you version of the story... 'coz I love your narration, and I'll read part two right away... :)