Tuesday, March 3, 2009

tHE Untold Story - Part II

Six months had passed by. She kept coming home every weekend which was very unlikely of her. Her eyes which uses to be lit like a star had seemed to lose its shine .Her smile also seemed artificial. Nobody could read her as I could. I tried to talk to her but she seems to look through me. She seemed to be in a daze, hardly interacting with any one. Sometimes I could hear her crying in the room but never had the courage to knock on the door. It tore my heart to see her in such a state.


One day, she was sitting in the veranda of our house, gazing the sky, one tear rolled out of her eyes. I wanted to hold her and calm her down, but this time I didn’t hold myself back but seriously made an effort to go to her, and asked her to share her problem with me. She denied immediately, she said she didn’t need any one, she doesn’t trust any one, anymore. She just wanted to be alone.


I didn’t walk away from there like I always did, this time I just sat next to her, in case she needed me. An hour passed, only the buzzing sound of flies could be heard. She realized that I was not leaving her side until she told me her problem. A fresh set of tears came down from her eyes. She mumbled during her sobs, that she had a boyfriend and he had broken her heart and was dating her best friend now. She didn’t know whom to trust and whom to talk to. Everything had fallen apart for her.


My world fell apart when she claimed to love some one else. No one could hear the shattering sound within me. I just held her hand to console her. I couldn’t cry. But this pain seemed to be everlasting, like the broken pieces of glass which seemed to have pierced into my skin. I hated her boyfriend for hurting her so much.


Love

Naveen

25 comments:

Lancelot said...

me the first

Lancelot said...

u asked me for the second part na?? its here...read and learn :P

Lancelot said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.........lend me a hanky please- i am very soft hearted kid you are making weep...*sob* *sob* *snifffffffffffffffffffffff*

moi said...

hello I posted it and I wrote it. Now you tell me the third part, if you know the story

moi said...

you actually crying ??? I will surely lend a hanky if you are telling the truth

Lancelot said...

he he he i am not revealing whether this is the last post or one more to come- let the readers read this later will reveal :P :P :P

Lancelot said...

if u r sending me a branded NIKE hanky (it rhymes)... then yes i am crying...

moi said...

You told to lend a hanky, so i thought of giving tissue paper :)

mayz said...

how many parts does this have??
poor naveen...

moi said...

mayz just one more part, which mostly will be posted tomorrow and it will be the 50th post :)

Lancelot said...

you wait for the third part tomorrow (mostly) and let me predict this will be your 50th post (don't tell others that i can predict future :P)

NE~ISM said...

Okay call me sappy! But yes My heart went out to her... On so many different parts of this story!

I felt so bad for Naveen To love someone and never tell them ends up breaking us more than just a break-up...

I am awaiting part 3..

Ne.

moi said...

@lancelot : you predicted the future wrong!!!guess why???

@Ne : Hey don't worry, even I am very emotional like that.will be posting the 3rd part tomorrow itself :)

Lancelot said...

2 moi

i have predicted why but I am not telling you that ;)

moi said...

@lancelot : I am sure you cant predict !!!

ApocalypsE said...

waiting for part 3...:-)

aZoed said...

it's bit different than the version that I've known... and yes,, more emotionally drenched... waiting for the next part... :)

Suresh Kumar said...

Ahh! This thing called love.
Can make your heart break into a thousand pieces.
Only plus point it doesn't make any noises when it breaks the heart.

Onthewingsofadream said...

oh !!I felt bad for the guy , who has to console the girl for somethin that is eating his soul ...good one ..will like to read part 3 ..

hope said...

ooo me all manti senti..

moi.. you write beautifully.. I just hope for a happy ending :(

btw is it possible for you to change your feed settings..?

Lancelot said...

I predicted already that you will say this...wait for it girlie...patience is important..

moi said...

@apocalypse : yeah will be posted today :)

@aZoed : yeah its quite emotional.

@Suresh : yes that thing called love, is surely a thing!!

@onthewingsofdream : hmmm yes will be posting today

@hope : even i am very emotional like that.

@lancelot : I am not telling anything :)

Lancelot said...

only few mins back I predicted that you are not going to say anything :P

moi said...

@lancelot : predict the ending of this story then i will believe you, and don't tell this time, that I should wait for the 3rd part

Lancelot said...

of course you have to wait for the third part girl...