Monday, November 30, 2009

You are the darkness in the night....
.... which comforts me into sleep even in troubles.

10 comments:

hitch writer said...

aah... ! lovely ! I gotta use these lines somewhere !! ;)

Suresh Kumar said...

darkness in the night?
sleep even in troubles?

bt everyone searches for a light in the darkness and one shud be awake even in his sleep na.....

Weirdo guy said...

damn that was romantic without being mushy ! niiiiice !




P.S loved the puzzle links in your old posts... especially that one about connections for the houses.. been at it for an hour straight !

Americanising Desi said...

:) hey!

moi said...

@hitchwriter : I am glad you liked it so much!

moi said...

@Suresh : when we see a light in the dark, it is usually heavenly something like god. But here I am just mentioning a presence of some one even though he is not around,but still the darkness makes me go to sleep.I hope I make sense. :)

moi said...

@weirdo guy: thats a weird name!! Okay Thanks for dropping by.Oh you tried to solve the puzzle? Great, if you get an answer do let me know too :)

moi said...

@seher : You smiled, I hope you liked it.

Suresh Kumar said...

@ Moi
Yups.. you make sense.. Sorry for not getting it first time around. Sometimes I am poor with poems...

moi said...

@suresh: no need to be sorry and all. sometimes we don't get the others perspective.thats all.